Allen Fox seems like a very knowledgeable person, but he is a frustrating writer. I'd love to know his insights into why a player loses emotional control, hear him describe and critique specific examples of such behavior, and read his thoughts on how to avoid these pitfalls.
But all I got from his article was the idea that players repeatedly fall into the same emotional traps because they don't try hard enough, or lack willpower.
That's neither insightful, nor helpful. (How helpful would it be for someone who is interested in losing weight to hear: "People gain weight because they eat too much and don't try hard enough to stop doing that." Oh really! Wow, that's amazing.)
His article felt like a repetitive, numbing series of generalizations. Please, someone, go in there on his next article and draw out his knowledge and insights: write things in the margin such as: "Allen, go into this more deeply please." "Allen, this is interesting, can you give some specific examples?" "Ok, Allen, you've stated this same problem in a number of similar ways. Now it's time to actually give some insight and suggest how you might help a player work on this problem."
Thanks!
But all I got from his article was the idea that players repeatedly fall into the same emotional traps because they don't try hard enough, or lack willpower.
That's neither insightful, nor helpful. (How helpful would it be for someone who is interested in losing weight to hear: "People gain weight because they eat too much and don't try hard enough to stop doing that." Oh really! Wow, that's amazing.)
His article felt like a repetitive, numbing series of generalizations. Please, someone, go in there on his next article and draw out his knowledge and insights: write things in the margin such as: "Allen, go into this more deeply please." "Allen, this is interesting, can you give some specific examples?" "Ok, Allen, you've stated this same problem in a number of similar ways. Now it's time to actually give some insight and suggest how you might help a player work on this problem."
Thanks!
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